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doubts of love feelings by ~meredithbrooksrulez:iconmeredithbrooksrulez:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I need to tell you how I feel
I want to know if you’re for real
You seem real nice
Just the type
But will you hurt me
Will you make me cry?
Or will you always be by my side
If I trust you will I regret it?
Will you hold me up?
Or push me down?
As if to drown me in the water
I know I am drowning in something
My love and the past breakups
Will you shout our love from the mountaintops?
Or will you be ashamed to say my name?
If we are together will the world be ours and will we get far?
Or will I have to admire you  from afar
Will you love me?
Or just lie to me
I need to be honest
But will you?
If I tell you I love you
What will you do?
©2005-2009 ~meredithbrooksrulez
:iconmeredithbrooksrulez:

Author's Comments

kinda sounds like love questions, well anyway i saw half of it and thought i should finish it so here it is i hope you like it as much as i do

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~Afeenaninganing Aug 30, 2005, 9:24:36 AM
This rock's, your gonna find yourself on my next artist of the week if you keep this up.

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-+- Vaan and Penelo-+-
"Every good sky pirate needs a partner, right?"
It. Is. CANON! BIATCH!:heart:
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~meredithbrooksrulez Aug 30, 2005, 9:25:41 AM
thanks you so much!!!!! and thanks for the favs

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
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~Afeenaninganing Aug 30, 2005, 9:27:19 AM
No problem, it's the way I am.

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-+- Vaan and Penelo-+-
"Every good sky pirate needs a partner, right?"
It. Is. CANON! BIATCH!:heart:
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~Dark0Goddess Jun 2, 2006, 9:43:13 AM
This is very nice. I like the gentleness of it. Wonderful approach.

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~For what, we ask, is life without a touch of Poetry in it?~
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~meredithbrooksrulez Jun 2, 2006, 7:11:17 PM
thank you i really like your comments

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I'm a bitch, I'm a lover,I'm a child, I'm a mother,I'm a sinner, I'm a saint,I do not feel ashamed,I'm your hell, I'm your dream i'm nothing in between, you know you wouldn't want it any other way-meredith brooks
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~Dark0Goddess Jun 5, 2006, 5:43:38 AM
Welcome!

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~For what, we ask, is life without a touch of Poetry in it?~
Co-Administrator of the *Citizens-of-Ai
Administrator *The-Red-Envelope
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